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[wickedflea]

Hey, am I the last person in America to have heard of slash fiction? That shit is WILD, yo. Just check out this snippet:

"Man, Cletus is even more screwed in the head then I thought -- probably more dangerous to." Luke thought to himself, the last part was a fearful revaluation.
"Now, just hang around here for a while, Luke, while I tend to your lover boy cousin." Cletus said, roughly patting Luke's cheek. He turned and stepped over to the bed, grinning wickedly at Bo.

Isn't that AWFUL? Not just the fact that Cletus Hogg is about to rape Bo and Luke Duke, but the WRITING!!! Wait a minute--this style is familiar. I'll bet this trash was written by none other than Carol from accounting!

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[invisibleflair.livejournal.com]

Random grammar question:
A bunch of my friends have this quote as their away message:
Don't let someone be a priority in your life, when you are an option in their's.

Now, is the comma after life necessary, and is it "theirs" or "their's"?

[wickedflea.livejournal.com]

No comma. "Theirs." Now tell 'em about it. :)